https://youtu.be/e4K3mXwME7g
I think that this is probably the best version of my elevator pitch. I felt the most relaxed in this recording and I think it was the perfect speed of talking. I kept the feedback I originally got and just added upon the positive feedback I received on my second version. That feedback was essentially saying that it looked like I was more comfortable and it was a better take. So I just tried to increase that and make the most comfortable version possible as well as add in a few different ways to say things depending on what came to mind while recording.
Hi Matthew,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on introducing your problem, target market, and any concerns the user might have such as not wanting to pay for medical expenses. Pointing out why the benefits are greater than the costs can influence your user to think more about their safety and the safety of others rather than their wallets which is the way it should be. You were also very professional in your pitch.
Thanks for sharing!
Tess
Hey Matt, I had also added to the positive feedback that I received regrading my second pitch. I believe you were able to cover every aspect that is important to a great pitch from great tone and posture to exceptional presentation of your message. I believe that your pitch can really catch many peoples' attention and yield many benefits that deal with how your product is perceived to be.
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