- I had feedback about the length of my video as well as topics involving insurance. I think that when I began talking about insurance I didn't really intend to speak upon such topics and left them in the video not really thinking too much about it, however, throughout developing this app I have never really touched upon insurance and agreed it was a topic that would be entirely different from what I was attempting to convey.
- I decided to change up the format of my pitch and move a few things around as well as talk a little more slowly and controlled to give a little more time to my video while adding a few topics. I decided to take out talking about insurance as well because it was never something that I really intended to be involved with my app. I want to mainly focus on guiding people in the right direction efficiently, quickly, and allow peace of mind to consumers.
Friday, March 16, 2018
17A - Elevator Pitch No. 2
https://youtu.be/TbC26aIG5UI
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Hey Matthew, I believe that you really took the feedback constructively and used it in your pitch. The tweaks you made to your pitch were very beneficial because your new pitch looks much stronger. I like the way that you were confident and happy to share your idea with us and the way you did not try to rush it was very important.
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