I think that you explained how the app would make people more sure whether they needed to see a specialist. However, you mentioned that people are worried about seeking medical attention due to insurance coverage and getting in trouble, how would this app help with people who were worried about coverage? However, it was good that you focused on people becoming more certain, which I believe is your main point you are trying to get across. You also used only 58 seconds, I believe that if you could’ve stated a statistic or fact to solidify your argument, it would’ve helped. I think I should have also done this in mine.
I think that you explained how the app would make people more sure whether they needed to see a specialist. However, you mentioned that people are worried about seeking medical attention due to insurance coverage and getting in trouble, how would this app help with people who were worried about coverage?
ReplyDeleteHowever, it was good that you focused on people becoming more certain, which I believe is your main point you are trying to get across. You also used only 58 seconds, I believe that if you could’ve stated a statistic or fact to solidify your argument, it would’ve helped. I think I should have also done this in mine.